Grammar Goofs to Avoid in Tenders & Proposals
Jordan Kelly

If you are to produce an authoritative submission, you must know the precise meaning of every word you use and be sure to use that word correctly.

To a large degree, the credibility of your company rests upon your grammatical diligence.

Here’s a quick list of words that regularly appear in bids, tenders and other forms of proposal . . . and that are also often mis-used in them.

These words have been drawn from the much larger list you will find in  ‘The Bid Writer’s Style & Grammar Guide’ (Part 4: Commonly Confused Words), and in my e-book, ‘Faulty Terms’ (which is dedicated specifically to this topic).

Ability / Capacity

Ability is a skill:  “He has great ability as a mechanical and electrical engineer.”

Capacity is the potential for something:  “His capacity for further learning in this field is limited.”

Adopt / Assume

To adopt is to take as one’s own:

“X Corporation adopted Y Corporation’s safety policies when it made the acquisition.”

Assume means (a) to take on at that moment in time, or (b) to suppose or take for granted:

“He assumed the stance of someone somewhat higher in office.”

“It’s less than ideal, but we’ll have to assume that’s what the client wants at this late stage.”

Alternately / Alternatively

Alternately means by turn:  A cyclist presses the pedals alternately to propel the machine.

Alternatively implies a choice: We can travel by air or, alternatively, by sea.

Alternatives are limited to two at a time. There cannot be three, four, or more alternatives.

Collaborate / Corroborate

To collaborate is to work together with towards a common goal:

“When we began to collaborate on this project, all tension dissolved.”

To corroborate is to use evidence to confirm an assumption or assertion:

“They said her account of the incident couldn’t be corroborated with that of the staff, but the truth of the matter is that the staff wouldn’t break ranks.”

Complimentary / Complementary

To compliment is to express a favorable observation; complimentary refers to being forthcoming with praise and compliments:

“To acknowledge the quality of the writing in our submission was a welcome compliment. Thank you.”

To complement , or to be complementary, refers to something which completes or enhances another thing:

“The material the two subject matter experts produced was complementary.”

Comprise / Compose / Constitute

Comprise:  The house comprises 10 rooms. (Do not write “is comprised of”. That is incorrect.)

Compose:  The party was composed of state managers and their BDMs.

Constitute:  Writing skills in themselves do not constitute a total education in strategic bid production.

Discreet / Discrete

Discreet means judicious in speech or conduct, especially with regard to privacy – either one’s own or others’. One can be discreet out of good grace, or for advantage:

“Your colleagues will respect you if you are discreet.”

Discrete means separate, distinct, apart from something else or the rest:

“That part of the factory’s plant performs discretely.”

Effective / Effectual

Something that is effective has generated a result:

“She’s an effective bid manager.”

Something effectual has achieved its purpose:

“The meeting was effectual in bringing about a resolution.”

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